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Author Topic: Corina, San Giovani, Rome  (Read 1653 times)
deadpoet
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« on: March 06, 2007, 07:36:17 AM »


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« Reply #1 on: March 06, 2007, 07:54:32 AM »
I like the first one. Outfit's pattern is nice. But better if the 'line' at the wall behind her does not 'cut' through her head?  Wink
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« Reply #2 on: March 06, 2007, 08:51:13 AM »
Normally, I do not give a damn about lines cutting through, but I have to agree that the first shot's lines through her head is not really complimenting the shot. It stands out far too strong in the image.

As for the 2nd shot, her right is unnatural, probably because due to the fact she was tip-toe-ing? Cheesy
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« Reply #3 on: March 06, 2007, 12:50:40 PM »
Quote from: espn on March 06, 2007, 08:51:13 AM
Normally, I do not give a damn about lines cutting through, but I have to agree that the first shot's lines through her head is not really complimenting the shot. It stands out far too strong in the image.

As for the 2nd shot, her right is unnatural, probably because due to the fact she was tip-toe-ing? Cheesy

The floor is dirty Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: March 06, 2007, 01:54:46 PM »
quite like the 1st pic, though lines cutting into both side of her head. the pattern on the wall is symetrical, very nice!
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« Reply #5 on: March 06, 2007, 01:55:51 PM »
Quote from: victor on March 06, 2007, 12:50:40 PM
Quote from: espn on March 06, 2007, 08:51:13 AM
Normally, I do not give a damn about lines cutting through, but I have to agree that the first shot's lines through her head is not really complimenting the shot. It stands out far too strong in the image.

As for the 2nd shot, her right is unnatural, probably because due to the fact she was tip-toe-ing? Cheesy

The floor is dirty Smiley

of course the floor is dirty ... it's the street outside the apartment I was staying
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« Reply #6 on: March 15, 2007, 04:14:57 PM »
The top is too big for her... needs someone with bigger breasts..
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« Reply #7 on: March 15, 2007, 09:12:28 PM »
someone needs a bigger brain
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« Reply #8 on: March 19, 2007, 02:32:51 PM »
Quote from: deadpoet on March 15, 2007, 09:12:28 PM
someone needs a bigger brain
dont get personal.. the top IS to BIG for her...
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