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cheeyt
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« on: February 27, 2007, 05:15:21 PM »
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Excellent model to work with.

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« Reply #1 on: February 27, 2007, 05:30:27 PM »
Very nice, and very different approach to the same model.

I really like the idea of the gradation in exposure and saturation.  However, still found the face too under exposed.  Wonder if it's because of my LCD or not.

Anyhow, good job.
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« Reply #2 on: February 27, 2007, 05:39:07 PM »
very nice pic... looking good!  Cheesy
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« Reply #3 on: February 27, 2007, 05:55:04 PM »
Quote from: deadpoet on February 27, 2007, 05:30:27 PM
Very nice, and very different approach to the same model.

I really like the idea of the gradation in exposure and saturation.  However, still found the face too under exposed.  Wonder if it's because of my LCD or not.

Anyhow, good job.

Thanks. Will improve on my next shoot. Nice seeing your team yesterday. Especially with that magnificent reflectors... Haha..
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« Reply #4 on: February 27, 2007, 06:15:21 PM »
Quote from: ukay on February 27, 2007, 05:39:07 PM
very nice pic... looking good!  Cheesy

Thanks. Mine is nothing compared with the shifu at here.
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« Reply #5 on: February 27, 2007, 06:57:40 PM »
I feel it's a bit too underexposed... nevertheless, if it's intentional, you're most free to express it your own way... Cheers  Cheesy
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« Reply #6 on: February 27, 2007, 07:02:31 PM »
Would be great to see this in print, face looks kinda of under on my screen to judge.
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« Reply #7 on: February 27, 2007, 07:45:34 PM »
This is the original picture.

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« Reply #8 on: February 27, 2007, 07:59:35 PM »
I would have preferred the concpt of the first shot, only add abit more exposure to the photo.
And maybe get her to straighten her legs.Looks like she is leaning on the door.
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« Reply #9 on: February 27, 2007, 08:02:37 PM »
Quote from: jediforce4ever on February 27, 2007, 07:59:35 PM
I would have preferred the concpt of the first shot, only add abit more exposure to the photo.
And maybe get her to straighten her legs.Looks like she is leaning on the door.

agree with jedi ... push the face exposure up another stop will do it in my opinion ... well, at least that is what I will do Smiley
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« Reply #10 on: February 27, 2007, 08:06:33 PM »
Left hand, middle finger? Hehe...
I'd say it's a pretty darn good pose that she has over there. Some lights in the eyes would be good.
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« Reply #11 on: February 27, 2007, 08:09:03 PM »
Quote from: jediforce4ever on February 27, 2007, 07:59:35 PM
I would have preferred the concpt of the first shot, only add abit more exposure to the photo.
And maybe get her to straighten her legs.Looks like she is leaning on the door.

Thanks alot.
Guess she had some difficulties in standing there due to the constraint space.
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« Reply #12 on: February 27, 2007, 08:10:00 PM »
Quote from: deadpoet on February 27, 2007, 08:02:37 PM
Quote from: jediforce4ever on February 27, 2007, 07:59:35 PM
I would have preferred the concpt of the first shot, only add abit more exposure to the photo.
And maybe get her to straighten her legs.Looks like she is leaning on the door.

agree with jedi ... push the face exposure up another stop will do it in my opinion ... well, at least that is what I will do Smiley

Will try it out later when i have some more time.
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« Reply #13 on: February 27, 2007, 08:11:10 PM »
Quote from: Michael on February 27, 2007, 08:06:33 PM
Left hand, middle finger? Hehe...
I'd say it's a pretty darn good pose that she has over there. Some lights in the eyes would be good.

I think the finger was acidentally. Hope it was'n meant for any of the photographers.. haha
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« Reply #14 on: February 27, 2007, 09:58:21 PM »
Perhaps remove the hair covering her left eye? Smiley
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