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« Reply #1 on: September 12, 2008, 04:09:37 PM » |
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Could you give a more detailed description of what you wanted to show?  |
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« Reply #2 on: September 12, 2008, 05:02:17 PM » |
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I went there for the sunset, then the lighting at night on the bridge. |
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« Reply #3 on: September 12, 2008, 05:44:17 PM » |
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#1 i'd personally put a tighter crop, removing some of the sky and the gate on the right
found it distracting as per #3 too
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« Reply #4 on: September 12, 2008, 06:52:09 PM » |
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Looks a bit dark for me.....
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« Reply #5 on: September 12, 2008, 07:43:21 PM » |
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I went there for the sunset, then the lighting at night on the bridge. But was there any particular message you are trying to show in the photographs? |
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« Reply #6 on: September 13, 2008, 11:12:03 AM » |
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#1 i'd personally put a tighter crop, removing some of the sky and the gate on the right
found it distracting as per #3 too
you mean like this?   |
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« Reply #7 on: September 13, 2008, 11:33:21 AM » |
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But was there any particular message you are trying to show in the photographs?
No I have never thought of any message. What should I do before I go out shooting? |
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« Reply #8 on: September 13, 2008, 05:57:33 PM » |
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I think he's trying to get it right techincally- exposure, framing , composition and etc. But was there any particular message you are trying to show in the photographs?
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« Reply #9 on: September 13, 2008, 06:01:56 PM » |
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The sunrise is good but you didn't show the wave clearly enough. The rest a bit too dark, try different framing,angle and other parts of the bridge.
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« Reply #10 on: September 13, 2008, 06:15:19 PM » |
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I think he's trying to get it right techincally- exposure, framing , composition and etc.
yup i'm still learning... |
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« Reply #11 on: September 13, 2008, 09:58:33 PM » |
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Well...if it is only about technicalities, then exposure wise and all the others are pretty okay... Only problem is, composition. We cannot critique on composition if you do not have a message to get across. Its like writing an essay without theme. Even if you have the best control of a language, you cannot write an interesting essay without something interesting to say. |
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« Reply #12 on: September 14, 2008, 01:21:37 AM » |
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Well...if it is only about technicalities, then exposure wise and all the others are pretty okay... Only problem is, composition. We cannot critique on composition if you do not have a message to get across. Its like writing an essay without theme. Even if you have the best control of a language, you cannot write an interesting essay without something interesting to say. In that case, perhaps I should think of what I want to show before taking the picture. Thanks The sunrise is good but you didn't show the wave clearly enough. The rest a bit too dark, try different framing,angle and other parts of the bridge.
Actually, its sunset... |
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« Reply #13 on: September 15, 2008, 10:53:21 AM » |
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1st pic is the strongest of the lot... but the horizon still needs to be brighter... as for the rest... i think the other guys have alr commented..
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« Reply #14 on: September 18, 2008, 12:31:51 PM » |
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Sorry need help here... i notice the colour different between my home monitor and my office one. Does anyone knows the ideal colour as picture 1 & 2 looks alot different from both monitor. I'm using LCD while office uses CRT.
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