Let's make it simple. Less is usually more. Less lights, less props, less hands squeezing things
The first thing that turned me off is how she squeezed her breasts. Very unnatural. Granted, sometimes, for what ever fcuk reason, boobs need to be covered up, but must doit natually. 99.9999% of such pictures, the pose ends up unnatural.
Less lights, as UK said, more lights, more problems. A lighting master will be able to make many lights work together as one. I am back to one light + one fill. Simple is better.
The perspective is off also. I never like these elongated look. The sphere is a good idea, but the silver surface + reflection is distracting.
