Portrait's Learning Journey: Rain

[Sexalicious]

this 2 photos was shot quite some time ago.
pls C&C 

thank you

[deadpoet]

The second pic, the lighting and composition is ok, but the model's styling is off, way off.  The way that dress/top is composed, looked weird.  Eye lashes problems.  The watch is distracting.  I actually do not mind the messy hair here.  However, her head really looked disproportionally huge, like a bobble head doll.

The first picture, I like it alot, except the hand.  It is again distracting, like a claw, and it destroyed the simple/smooth lines of the models.