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beansprout
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« on: July 01, 2008, 12:08:04 PM »

This is Holly ... a UK model ... Did a group shoot with her some time last year in October.
Done the DI long ago but got no chance to post it anywhere ....

Comments are welcome.

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« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2008, 12:34:04 PM »

I will go far a slightly more dramatic lighting arrangement, a bit more contrast would be good.

My attention was also drawn to the top of the model's thigh high stocking.  The elastic of the stocking actually made the model's thigh look bigger.  DI would fix the problem.

I am looking at this image from the stand point of an art/galmour portrait.  Hence, everything must be done to make the model look GOOD.

Overall, I like this image.
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« Reply #2 on: July 14, 2008, 11:56:47 PM »

Ok .... I am reviving this thread with another 2 photos .... with colours ....  Group Wave

Oh BTW Please note that there are bits showing in these photos ... so please do not look of you are offended ...

Comments and Critiques are most welcome ....

#1
http://www.snapdrive.net/files/495315/Models/DSC3743_PS_web.jpg

#2
http://www.snapdrive.net/files/495315/Models/DSC3651_PS_web.jpg


Thanks for dropping in to take a look .... Please aslo leave your comments ... Don't just come for the show ......
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« Reply #3 on: July 15, 2008, 03:01:56 AM »

Her expression is very plastic... the lighting is not too bad. the hmmm... but i would prefer more contrast in the light setup... overall its a nice series... keep it up man
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« Reply #4 on: July 15, 2008, 03:57:27 AM »

I think her expression in #2 is much better. in #1 she looks kinda deer-in-the-headlight. but in #2 should pull her panties down a bit so it is not visible.
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