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June 14, 2008, 11:48:27 PM »
I think this one was well-taken. Good job and good recovery from your previous models.
Watch the knee of her jeans on her right leg and the zipper of her jeans. She's beautiful. Nice long torso. Her face is a bit small for the rest of her, no? Still, I would shoot her.
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Quote from: Triazolium on June 14, 2008, 11:48:27 PM
I think this one was well-taken. Good job and good recovery from your previous models.
Watch the knee of her jeans on her right leg and the zipper of her jeans. She's beautiful. Nice long torso. Her face is a bit small for the rest of her, no? Still, I would shoot her.
thanks. haha.
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June 15, 2008, 02:02:55 AM »
It's in a studio, with strobes, and you are the master of the light, why all the details gone from her hair and jeans?
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June 15, 2008, 02:53:09 AM »
Since she has such lovely hair and face, and you have the wind machine going, you'd better have a good close-up face shot of her.
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Quote from: deadpoet on June 15, 2008, 02:02:55 AM
It's in a studio, with strobes, and you are the master of the light, why all the details gone from her hair and jeans?
haha. me noob of light. i think my pp took away most of the details. if i take away some contrast, u can probably see the details more clearly.
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Quote from: Triazolium on June 15, 2008, 02:53:09 AM
Since she has such lovely hair and face, and you have the wind machine going, you'd better have a good close-up face shot of her.
actually i dont. haha.
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June 15, 2008, 11:10:08 PM »
jeans have some details la... the hair is black, dead black, as in RGB: 0 0 and 0
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June 16, 2008, 09:05:17 AM »
this is a very huge improvement from the last few series
first pic... her neck looks like the hulk... need to remember to position her in such a way it looks more natural...
2nd pic... look out for her tummy lah... either that or u tuck it in.. i would prefer a longer vertucal crop for this photo...
anyhows... good effort!
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June 16, 2008, 11:12:09 AM »
the neck was even thicker but i PP liao. i forgot abt the tummy for the 2nd pic. overlooked that part. it was actually a portrait shot but i thought i try a landscape crop.
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June 16, 2008, 12:52:56 PM »
Landscape crop is fine... i did a 3 min edit... this is what i mean... the body positioning could be better though... but give what is shown... this is what i mean...
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Quote from: UKay on June 16, 2008, 12:52:56 PM
Landscape crop is fine... i did a 3 min edit... this is what i mean... the body positioning could be better though... but give what is shown... this is what i mean...
oic. get what u mean now.
i did thought of a wider crop but decided with the current one instead.
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Quote from: boredphuck on June 15, 2008, 03:09:05 AM
actually i dont. haha.
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