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Author Topic: My Sassy Girl II  (Read 999 times)
minotaur
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« on: June 04, 2008, 12:07:49 PM »
C&c pls
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« Reply #1 on: June 05, 2008, 09:14:51 AM »
Pay attention to shadows from your flash (pic 1).  It's all over the background and all over her body.

The color/white balance appeared to be a bit all over the place. pic one looks bit too cold/blueish tone, pic 2 same but the red is a bit too heavy, pic 3 too warm and too much red, pic 4 looks good, on the spot.

But why did you tilt the horizon on 4?HuhHuh

Go shoot more!
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« Reply #2 on: June 06, 2008, 12:25:52 AM »
She's a beautiful model, but I feel like your photos are just ordinary snapshots.  Blah- just blah.  You didn't do her justice at all.  Light is boring, compo is boring.  Just plain amateurish.    Sleep Sleep Sleep
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Michael
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« Reply #3 on: June 07, 2008, 10:40:53 AM »
#3 so shy... i like... <3!
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minotaur
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« Reply #4 on: June 08, 2008, 08:06:16 AM »
Quote from: deadpoet on June 05, 2008, 09:14:51 AM
Pay attention to shadows from your flash (pic 1).  It's all over the background and all over her body.

The color/white balance appeared to be a bit all over the place. pic one looks bit too cold/blueish tone, pic 2 same but the red is a bit too heavy, pic 3 too warm and too much red, pic 4 looks good, on the spot.

But why did you tilt the horizon on 4?HuhHuh

Go shoot more!

The shadow is from the big reflector. Look like I had overdid the WB for 1 and 2. The original were very warm. My bad on the compo, just can resist posting this because the color tone is very nice.
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minotaur
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« Reply #5 on: June 08, 2008, 08:06:51 AM »
Quote from: Triazolium on June 06, 2008, 12:25:52 AM
She's a beautiful model, but I feel like your photos are just ordinary snapshots.  Blah- just blah.  You didn't do her justice at all.  Light is boring, compo is boring.  Just plain amateurish.    Sleep Sleep Sleep

Totally agreed.
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