A : Adeline

[boredphuck]

[deadpoet]

Overall, I like the feel of this picture. I would try a few different things if I were shooting.

I prefer either a tighter crop, but personally, I would have included the entire body. 

The lighting can be a more harsh, more dramatic.  That said, must be careful the forearm is not too overly blown.  However, at this point, the lost of details in her hair is very distracting.  The model has a head of beautiful hair, and it dominates the picture.  But without the lost of details, particularly above the forehead and to the side of her face, an attribute becomes a problem.

On styling, I like the white on white a lot.  However, her panties, the horizontal pattern is just too prominent, and is fighting for unwanted attention.  Well, unless, the focus is in fact on her panties, then, the the top is doing the same. 

Pay attention to the background.  The grey now, I feel it's a bit too bright, and therefore distracting. 

[boredphuck]

Overall, I like the feel of this picture. I would try a few different things if I were shooting.

I prefer either a tighter crop, but personally, I would have included the entire body. 

The lighting can be a more harsh, more dramatic.  That said, must be careful the forearm is not too overly blown.  However, at this point, the lost of details in her hair is very distracting.  The model has a head of beautiful hair, and it dominates the picture.  But without the lost of details, particularly above the forehead and to the side of her face, an attribute becomes a problem.

On styling, I like the white on white a lot.  However, her panties, the horizontal pattern is just too prominent, and is fighting for unwanted attention.  Well, unless, the focus is in fact on her panties, then, the the top is doing the same. 

Pay attention to the background.  The grey now, I feel it's a bit too bright, and therefore distracting. 

was working with limited light and light source because half way through it started raining. didnt have contingency of using flash as well. so had to pose her near to best light source i could get. hence the background as well. it was worse actually with a door behind but i pp it away.

i was shooting wide open so probably thats why the details in her hair was gone. didnt expect her to drop her pants so the undies was not part of the plan. 

[deadpoet]

was working with limited light and light source because half way through it started raining. didnt have contingency of using flash as well. so had to pose her near to best light source i could get. hence the background as well. it was worse actually with a door behind but i pp it away.

i was shooting wide open so probably thats why the details in her hair was gone. didnt expect her to drop her pants so the undies was not part of the plan. 

always be prepared, model might actually drop her pants.

btw, organize a shoot with her lah ... don't mind shooting her.

[hwchoy]

i was shooting wide open so probably thats why the details in her hair was gone. didnt expect her to drop her pants so the undies was not part of the plan. 

corollary: models may drop their pants when shot wide open. 

[Triazolium]

If she had planned to drop her pants, couldn't she have worn a matching panty??    

Hate her jaw and dull lips.  Hate the panty.  Should've worn a more flattering top since she's flat-chested (like me).  Hate the top, period.  I actually don't mind her arm being blown out like that if her pose had been different. 

[Michael]

errr... i feel strange with that crop

[boredphuck]

always be prepared, model might actually drop her pants.

btw, organize a shoot with her lah ... don't mind shooting her.

i'll check with her when i pass her the pics. shld be fine.

[boredphuck]

corollary: models may drop their pants when shot wide open. 

haha. u always know how to read between the lines and legs.

[boredphuck]

If she had planned to drop her pants, couldn't she have worn a matching panty??    

Hate her jaw and dull lips.  Hate the panty.  Should've worn a more flattering top since she's flat-chested (like me).  Hate the top, period.  I actually don't mind her arm being blown out like that if her pose had been different. 

dropping was unexpected! really! she insisted no lingerie. 

yeah. she doesnt have a very nice jawline but her attitude makes up for it. 

[boredphuck]

errr... i feel strange with that crop

strange? tingling sensation? 

[Triazolium]

strange? tingling sensation? 

More like a strange WANT TO VOMIT MY INTESTINES OUT sensation.
Unhealthy hair (dry hair, split ends)
That jawline
Dry plain lips (WTF she can put mascara on but not lipgloss or even blush!??!?!)
There is a hair stuck in her mouth (see the right corner of her mouth) WTF??

ICK.  Just ICK.

[Michael]

lol. looks like she wore sanitary pads.   

and she's munching her hair

[boredphuck]

caught on B&W film.

[victor]

Err...the black and white dosen't work for me due to the lack of life in the photo.