I would have liked this picture a lot if 1) the arms are not posed as they were, as it is, lots of stresses on the arm, the shoulder and chin, and 2) the perspective especially on the leg is off, the knee looked overly large, so did her feet. This is a typical problem using std to wide angle lenses and composing the extremities towards the edge of the lens.
I like the lighting, The face looked a bit too oily though.
all in all an extremely good effort.
i agree with all the points u mentioned. but the face just draws me in.
she sweats even more than me during the shoot. good attitude from her though.
