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Author Topic: strolling and snapping at Pasir Ris park  (Read 541 times)
Simply80Chup
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« on: March 04, 2008, 09:21:48 PM »

Hi all,

A newbie here. Taken a few shot at Pasir Ris park. Need CnC from u guys. The more the better. I can learn more. Please be gentle ya  I am new...hehe

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evershine
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« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2008, 10:00:21 PM »

Hi welcome... Smiley..  The resolution or size of your photo is too big. I have to scroll left and right to view.. its hard to visualize. Perhaps  you can try to reduce the size to not more than 800pixels (width).
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Michael
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« Reply #2 on: March 04, 2008, 10:16:19 PM »

You need to get a better subject in your composition. The first shot, subject in focus is the flower on the right, which is on the verge of falling off the photo. I don't get the last shot. The 2nd, red flower? It's bloody red. Too saturated for my liking.
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jediforce4ever
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« Reply #3 on: March 04, 2008, 10:23:25 PM »

You need to know the reason why you compose the shot.
Maybe you could explain your compositions so that we can help you better. Smiley
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