"Rain" is in town

[minotaur]

A few pics of the first set of clothes
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C&c will be much appreciated

[deadpoet]

#2.  Too many limbs amputated.  This is just bad composition.  The jaw line of the model is too pronounced.  The light is a bit harsh also.

#3.  Overall OK, but the posing and composition needs work.  There is just too much dead space between her hand, arm, chin and neck.  Closer crop would have fixed it.  The hand, with the palm open, made it look disproportion ally huge compare to her face.  Pose it at an angle would also have fixed it.  These are important details a photographer must pay attention to.

#1.  Best of the lot, except that the way her left arm got cropped threw the picture completely out of balance.  In DI, a tight crop would hav saved the picture.  Better, spot it when shooting and fix it there by stepping back, giving it the balance it needs.

[minotaur]

#2.  Too many limbs amputated.  This is just bad composition.  The jaw line of the model is too pronounced.  The light is a bit harsh also.

#3.  Overall OK, but the posing and composition needs work.  There is just too much dead space between her hand, arm, chin and neck.  Closer crop would have fixed it.  The hand, with the palm open, made it look disproportion ally huge compare to her face.  Pose it at an angle would also have fixed it.  These are important details a photographer must pay attention to.

#1.  Best of the lot, except that the way her left arm got cropped threw the picture completely out of balance.  In DI, a tight crop would hav saved the picture.  Better, spot it when shooting and fix it there by stepping back, giving it the balance it needs.

Thanks for your comments, will be careful the next time I shoot.

Here a few from the next set of clothings, C&c please
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[Michael]

From your 2nd post, I do appreciate both images.

The first one seems to be everything okay except the eyes. Probably tilting a bit more towards the camera would be better. As for the second, a little bit under and the dark patch of her right cheek doesn't look good. After seeing your shots and Rex's shots, I now understand how badly done the make up is.