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« on: January 06, 2008, 12:05:19 PM »
my feeble attempts to shoot j-idol style.  Grin
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« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2008, 12:23:54 PM »
IMO, you are getting there, BP.  Grin
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« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2008, 01:23:49 PM »
But the wall and her skin can DI a bit...exposure a bit under. Keep trying....and post more...I think you have some pics hidding from us!!! giggling...
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« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2008, 01:44:42 PM »
should have added a bit more more more light... catchlights and reflector on the left. head is cropped off. although the stance is somewhat acceptable, i think the hair, and her hands close to her chest, can't really convey a cheeky feeling as you don't really notice she's taken them off
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« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2008, 01:47:58 PM »
Crop is too tight. Be more careful with lighting. Note all the uneven shadows and skin tones. I can see the stretch marks, clone them out! Make use of the liquify tool if you have to. Posing wise, stance is ok but not angle. Try a 45 degree approach. It's more flattering. Her smile isn't convincing enough for a J-Idol shot. Smile more! Nonetheless, it's an improvement over the previous series.
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« Reply #5 on: January 06, 2008, 02:35:21 PM »
wouldn't it be better to stand away from a featureless wall?
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« Reply #6 on: January 06, 2008, 02:36:17 PM »
I think bikini bottom not straightened out properly, the top edge like "folded"?
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« Reply #7 on: January 06, 2008, 03:39:07 PM »
Quote from: hwchoy on January 06, 2008, 02:36:17 PM
I think bikini bottom not straightened out properly, the top edge like "folded"?
now .... whose job is it "to straighten" the bikini .... the model or the photographer?...... Laugh till drop
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« Reply #8 on: January 06, 2008, 03:43:14 PM »
the PA !!!
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« Reply #9 on: January 06, 2008, 04:21:32 PM »
just noticed also the bikini bottom strings not tied properly (the ribbon not balanced).
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« Reply #10 on: January 06, 2008, 04:50:50 PM »
Erhm the black spots on the wall look distracting, should clone it away.

Agree with the lighting. Could've used more lighting or use off shoe flash.
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« Reply #11 on: January 06, 2008, 08:58:48 PM »
Quote from: victor on January 06, 2008, 01:23:49 PM
But the wall and her skin can DI a bit...exposure a bit under. Keep trying....and post more...I think you have some pics hidding from us!!! giggling...

nothing hidden this time.  Smiley
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« Reply #12 on: January 06, 2008, 08:59:39 PM »
Quote from: Michael on January 06, 2008, 01:44:42 PM
should have added a bit more more more light... catchlights and reflector on the left. head is cropped off. although the stance is somewhat acceptable, i think the hair, and her hands close to her chest, can't really convey a cheeky feeling as you don't really notice she's taken them off

head cropping is intentional. will take note of the other details.
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« Reply #13 on: January 06, 2008, 09:01:04 PM »
Quote from: iexist on January 06, 2008, 01:47:58 PM
Crop is too tight. Be more careful with lighting. Note all the uneven shadows and skin tones. I can see the stretch marks, clone them out! Make use of the liquify tool if you have to. Posing wise, stance is ok but not angle. Try a 45 degree approach. It's more flattering. Her smile isn't convincing enough for a J-Idol shot. Smile more! Nonetheless, it's an improvement over the previous series.

the smiling ones didnt look right. crop was intentional.
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« Reply #14 on: January 06, 2008, 10:50:47 PM »
dude. this one is good posture for j-idol but crop just slightly below the navel and above the elbows... it looks better that way. no need to be fixed ratio, just crop.
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