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« Reply #1 on: January 02, 2008, 09:53:52 AM » |
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lol. u got crucified on the other forum...  got flash liao buay? add with reflector, comb hair, shd be better... for now, eyes no catchlights, hands got some ugly looking cross and background aim wrong place la dey...
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« Reply #2 on: January 02, 2008, 09:58:52 AM » |
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photoshop in some mozzie bites lah 
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« Reply #3 on: January 02, 2008, 10:00:45 AM » |
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nope but decided not to give them any eye candy. just got the flash but it was after the shoot. she was the straw that broke the camel's back. that and i was inspired by DM.  the sun came and went so could hardly use the reflector. what would be a better background? more consistent greens?
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« Reply #4 on: January 02, 2008, 10:02:52 AM » |
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i'd personally put her right hand on the leg instead of dangling there. probably remove that black arm bangle too. add a reflector in front for catchlights. u can notice there's shadows on her face, light from top left... get on my knees and aim straight instead of aiming down to avoid the ground and select continuous darker trees not lalang...
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« Reply #5 on: January 02, 2008, 10:44:03 AM » |
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 shooting a model infront of a barren green background? what is the value of a photo like that?
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« Reply #6 on: January 02, 2008, 10:47:09 AM » |
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 shooting a model infront of a barren green background? what is the value of a photo like that? i quite short of ideas for location. any place to suggest?
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« Reply #7 on: January 02, 2008, 12:12:54 PM » |
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Indeed a big reflector will help. what kind of locale you want? depends on the kind of shoot you're doing too.
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« Reply #8 on: January 02, 2008, 12:14:07 PM » |
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A very far location between Changi beach and at the end of East coast park. Go recce by bike first - starting from east coast park ride all the way to Changi beach! http://www.nparks.gov.sg/park_connectors_18.asp
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« Reply #9 on: January 02, 2008, 12:37:57 PM » |
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i quite short of ideas for location. any place to suggest?
well.... got many wad... can be in a park like evershine suggested... can be in orchard road.. can be in ur bed.. can be anywhere.. but make it more interesting lah... 
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« Reply #10 on: January 02, 2008, 12:53:15 PM » |
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photoshop in some mozzie bites lah  i pp away u ask me pp them in. 
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« Reply #11 on: January 02, 2008, 12:53:57 PM » |
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« Reply #12 on: January 02, 2008, 12:54:14 PM » |
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well.... got many wad... can be in a park like evershine suggested... can be in orchard road.. can be in ur bed.. can be anywhere.. but make it more interesting lah...  bed ah? ok. next shoot. 
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« Reply #13 on: January 02, 2008, 04:26:14 PM » |
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harsh shadows on the face and arms. the legs look weird. she shld have worn shoes. background is terrible again. anything i missed out? 
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« Reply #14 on: January 02, 2008, 04:26:45 PM » |
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oh yeah. model got stubby legs. 
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